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What a promising VN! I'm looking forward to your creativity in the next updates:)

Thanks for reading my VN! The next update will be released in mid September or late September/early October, this will depend more on the artists how long it takes them to create all the new skins! See you soon!

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possibly the best main character name for the game 

AHAHAHAH Well, Points of view ๐Ÿ‘€

Got to the point where I wake up after hearing about the initiation and none of the options work to keep going. Rip.

i'll fix when i come back to home, sorry for the issue

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I'm playing the app version but this error keeps coming up every time the mc talks

I don't know what changed, but version 2.0 is not available for download via the app, even though prior versions were.

Umh.. maybe i do something wrong during the upload or the build creation, i'll do a check tomorrow, for the app, you mean android version?

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Not the android version. The itch.io desktop application.

ok, thanks for the report, i'll do a check on it, maybe something change and i don't saw that, sorry for the bad issue๐Ÿ˜“

You need to note which file belongs to which platform, if you don't app won't "see" what file to download and just do nothing. It's also won't notify about updates. This problem exist only for itch client, site downloads are manual.

Awesome game :3

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A Chinese version can be integrated in the future with the help of the community, my knowledge of Chinese is poor and not enough to be able to translate it.

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I think it's a pretty good game as well. The starting story is quite interesting and interesting. Search right now and I'll give it four stars because if there's an update I'll give it 5 stars. I think your game should be good, but notice what you choose to do. I really like your game and I will wait to follow yours ๐Ÿค๐ŸฆŠ

Thanks for your comment, the next update will be in mid-June for the Patreon, while the Public version will be released at the end of June. Soon, on Twitter, a spoiler will be released regarding version 2.0 which will be much richer in content and plot!

Wow, I will wait and follow up.๐Ÿค๐Ÿฆ‹

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just played, 
there's not much yet, still it was interesting enough, i wonder that other routes/character are in planning, but congrats for it being your first try at doing a game.

there's a bug when after you hear Raoul hurting himself and go to check him, sprites overlap, it shows him both already clothed and his naked version at the same time.

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Thanks for the feedback, but above all for pointing out the problem of the overlapping images, I'll proceed to resolve everything, so that in the next patch (not the one releasing the continuous story) everything will be alright!

As for the characters, there are 3 more being worked on by the artist, and, consequently, 3 other accessible routes, all of which, if my skills and timing allow me, will be developed at the same time while maintaining all 4, more or less, on the same level of completion.
Thanks again for reading my VN, and get ready for the next build!

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Well it's your first game, I can't really say much anyway, you deserve at least 4 stars for now until there are more updates so I change your mind but it wasn't bad at first u_u

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Do you have permission from the original artist to use this background in your project?
https://fish032.artstation.com/projects/PmWey

He isn't credited anywhere on the page.

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In truth I needed that as a start, being my first VN I needed to understand how it worked, and I forgot to remove it, so I update for a moment with the new one (actually removing the image).

  I absolutely didn't want to steal and pass it all off as mine, I apologize!